Monday, February 8, 2010

Tonight's Homework

I have completed tonight's homework as well. Students need to complete the second draft, and add transitions and examples in the body of the essay. I have added transitions in black, and I have added examples to paragraph 1.

Introduction & Conclusion-SAMPLE from PERIOD 1's Essay


Use the example introduction and the example conclusion as a model to help you as you write your own introduction and conclusion.

A little Late...


Sorry for posting this so late. I was taking care of work. When I arrived at my home, I ate dinner and decided to make cookies. But now I am doing our homework for class. Below I have posted the body paragraphs my period 1 class and I have been working on together.


Thursday, February 4, 2010

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Homework Help

Homework tonight is to create the introduction paragraph for the composition that addresses the prompt, "why is college important?"

The first paragraph (above) is from period 5 Support ELA, and the second paragraph (below) is from period 4 Support ELA.